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This is page #0, because I drew it after I finished the first chapter complitely. I decided what story need a little bit more of exposition. Still, I apologize if the first 10 or so pages the story will be not very understandable... And I also apologize for being pretty bad writer in general ^__^
My thanks to ~Zannid for beta-reading almost all of first chapter. She also rewrote some of sentences to make them better! Also thanks to ~WorkingTitleGames and ~shivu2738 for help.
But if you'll find any grammatic mistakes, say me. I'll fix them immediately.
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SykoZombieChick Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2012
This art is fantastic! How old is that kid suppose to be I wanna use him as reference when I design my Wondergirl character, mostly for proportions of course :3
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Autumn-Sacura Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you very much! He is supposed to be 4-5 years old, but I can't guarantee I made proportions right.
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SykoZombieChick Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2012
It's cool, I can build off of that, this is what I have so far for my Wondergirl design [link] Tell me what you think, I'm still in the design process X3
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Autumn-Sacura Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Wow! This looks cool! She is so cute. Is there will be a comic about her?
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SykoZombieChick Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012
Hopefully, I still have a lot of work to do before then :3
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evelyn-stormcraft Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Panel 4: is that meant to say "suppress your will" or "surpass your will?"
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Autumn-Sacura Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Suppress. Fixed! Thanks for notice ^__^
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tenko72 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2012
This is good, so far. I feel sorry for Marius.
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Lemniskate Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2012
Aha - so you have two letters for "r" - the cross-like one for thealveolar trill (a. k.a. "Russian and Udmurt r"), and the two triangles pointing downwards for the alveolar/retroflex approximant (a.k.a. "English r").
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Autumn-Sacura Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
:nod:
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