Page #1. Yep, now it's hard to understand anything, I'm sorry about that. I need to say, some of plot elements remind of my old work "Yuzo". But I think only about 3,5 persons remember Yuzo now, so I doubt anyone notice anything ^__^ Thanks to ~Zannid for beta-reading almost all of first chapter. She also rewrote some of sentences to make them better. If you'll find any grammatic mistakes, say me. I'll fix them immediately. Also don't forget about hidden content ^__^
I dig the animation on the lamps. It was so subtle I almost missed it. The fourth panel is a tad confusing as the guy pointing the gun isn't even pointing it at Koshmar which kind of decreases the threat and makes the action confusing.
There will be more puzzles later!