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Page #1. Yep, now it's hard to understand anything, I'm sorry about that.
I need to say, some of plot elements remind of my old work "Yuzo". But I think only about 3,5 persons remember Yuzo now, so I doubt anyone notice anything ^__^
Thanks to ~Zannid for beta-reading almost all of first chapter. She also rewrote some of sentences to make them better.
If you'll find any grammatic mistakes, say me. I'll fix them immediately.
Also don't forget about hidden content ^__^


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:iconkates07632:
kates07632 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
KOSHMAR HAHAHAH XD thats russian
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:iconautumn-sacura:
Autumn-Sacura Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
:D
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:iconkates07632:
kates07632 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
По нашему
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:iconkozispoon:
kozispoon Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Student General Artist
I dig the animation on the lamps. It was so subtle I almost missed it. The fourth panel is a tad confusing as the guy pointing the gun isn't even pointing it at Koshmar which kind of decreases the threat and makes the action confusing.
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:iconautumn-sacura:
Autumn-Sacura Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
You are right! Thank you for noticing ^__^
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:iconlemniskate:
Lemniskate Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012
Julie, Vesta, Marius, Quint and Felix. Game Over ;P
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:iconautumn-sacura:
Autumn-Sacura Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
:iconbravoplz: Great work! Well, all but one letter, but still impressive! :love:
There will be more puzzles later!
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evelyn-stormcraft Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Felip, perhaps?
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:iconautumn-sacura:
Autumn-Sacura Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Nope, another one ^__^
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:iconreginyralunasky:
ReginyraLunasky Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I realized the animated flower thingy after looking at the page a third time (was trying to understand what was going on) This looks good so far, in a sorta scary way (referring to the last 3 panels). I wonder where this will go. It'd be funny if it was actually really hard to get in. MWAHAHAHA! Ok I'm done.

Btw, what does those red marks that look like an ancient language mean?
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:iconautumn-sacura:
Autumn-Sacura Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you for compliments! About animated parts and red letter it explained in first pages: [link] [link]
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:iconreginyralunasky:
ReginyraLunasky Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2012  Student Digital Artist
OH. Thanks!!!
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:iconlemniskate:
Lemniskate Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012
The key to the letters is on several of the pages posted thus far. Try to break the code yourself :)
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:iconreginyralunasky:
ReginyraLunasky Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012  Student Digital Artist
okay thanks Ididn't see the other pages, thus the reason I did't catch on. Thanks for letting me know!! :glomp:
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