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Page #1. Yep, now it's hard to understand anything, I'm sorry about that.
I need to say, some of plot elements remind of my old work "Yuzo". But I think only about 3,5 persons remember Yuzo now, so I doubt anyone notice anything ^__^
Thanks to ~Zannid for beta-reading almost all of first chapter. She also rewrote some of sentences to make them better.
If you'll find any grammatic mistakes, say me. I'll fix them immediately.
Also don't forget about hidden content ^__^


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:iconkates07632:
kates07632 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
KOSHMAR HAHAHAH XD thats russian
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:iconautumn-sacura:
Autumn-Sacura Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
:D
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:iconkates07632:
kates07632 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
По нашему
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kozispoon Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Student General Artist
I dig the animation on the lamps. It was so subtle I almost missed it. The fourth panel is a tad confusing as the guy pointing the gun isn't even pointing it at Koshmar which kind of decreases the threat and makes the action confusing.
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:iconautumn-sacura:
Autumn-Sacura Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
You are right! Thank you for noticing ^__^
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Lemniskate Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012
Julie, Vesta, Marius, Quint and Felix. Game Over ;P
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:iconautumn-sacura:
Autumn-Sacura Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
:iconbravoplz: Great work! Well, all but one letter, but still impressive! :love:
There will be more puzzles later!
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evelyn-stormcraft Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Felip, perhaps?
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:iconautumn-sacura:
Autumn-Sacura Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Nope, another one ^__^
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