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Page #14. The fight continues ^__^
Thanks to ~Zannid for beta-reading almost all of first chapter. But if you'll find any grammatic mistakes anyway, say me. I'll fix them immediately.
Don't forget about hidden content.

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:icontif-ling:
Tif-Ling Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012
What does this curse mean? At least what language is it?
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:iconartificer-urza:
Artificer-Urza Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012
Fighting the way he does I can understand; he's not the most physically imposing person. But I object to striking a person when they are down.
How does someone with such a venomous personality have any allies, let alone friends.
Of course, he might have a crush Yulie and in some twisted sentiment is doing this for her benefit.
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:iconphantom-brave:
Phantom-Brave Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012
FIGHT THE SYSTEM!
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:iconautumn-sacura:
Autumn-Sacura Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
:D
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:iconmaskoftwilight:
MaskofTwilight Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
In the 4th panel, the guy with the yellow shirt should say "What did she say?"

I want to know what Yulie is saying so bad!!! I have a feeling they already know about the dream world...

And we're going to meet Guitry soon, can't wait!
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:iconautumn-sacura:
Autumn-Sacura Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you! I fixed it ^__^
Hope you'll like how everything will turn out ^__^
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:iconmaelora69:
Maelora69 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I still say he should get eaten by the winged kitty :(
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:iconautumn-sacura:
Autumn-Sacura Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
:giggle:
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:iconmaelora69:
Maelora69 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You've really made us care about the characters - really good job!
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:iconkaytori:
Kaytori Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012
think Quint went a little too far then but he didn't seriously hurt her. Can't wait to find out what his deal is.
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:iconhaldaraina:
Haldaraina Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012
well... hello again!
so unknown dudes bubble, He said "said" it should be "say" :)
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:iconautumn-sacura:
Autumn-Sacura Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you ^__^ Fixed.
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:iconlemniskate:
Lemniskate Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012
Ӟеч улонэз медад адӟы:
куке гур выл шоры сяська потӥз,
кырымпыдсад гон ке потӥз,
соку ӟеч улонэз мед адӟод.

Where did you find this curse?
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:iconautumn-sacura:
Autumn-Sacura Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
[link]
Good site about folklore.
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:iconlemniskate:
Lemniskate Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012
Highly interesting!
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Emh5567 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
I think in the third panel, in Yulie's thought bubble, you might have meant to say, "Vesta, why are you doing this to me" instead of "doing it with me"?

And quite the page turner you've got! Nice job, even though I screamed at the computer monitor a second ago.
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:iconautumn-sacura:
Autumn-Sacura Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you for help!
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:icontenko72:
tenko72 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012
I was just about to post that. "Doing with with me" means something else entirely. :blush:

I agree. This is a page turner. I'm wowed!
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