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Page #14. The fight continues ^__^
Thanks to ~Zannid for beta-reading almost all of first chapter. But if you'll find any grammatic mistakes anyway, say me. I'll fix them immediately.
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:icontif-ling:
Tif-Ling Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012
What does this curse mean? At least what language is it?
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:iconartificer-urza:
Artificer-Urza Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012
Fighting the way he does I can understand; he's not the most physically imposing person. But I object to striking a person when they are down.
How does someone with such a venomous personality have any allies, let alone friends.
Of course, he might have a crush Yulie and in some twisted sentiment is doing this for her benefit.
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:iconphantom-brave:
Phantom-Brave Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012
FIGHT THE SYSTEM!
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:iconautumn-sacura:
Autumn-Sacura Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
:D
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:iconmaskoftwilight:
MaskofTwilight Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
In the 4th panel, the guy with the yellow shirt should say "What did she say?"

I want to know what Yulie is saying so bad!!! I have a feeling they already know about the dream world...

And we're going to meet Guitry soon, can't wait!
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Autumn-Sacura Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you! I fixed it ^__^
Hope you'll like how everything will turn out ^__^
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:iconmaelora69:
Maelora69 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I still say he should get eaten by the winged kitty :(
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:iconautumn-sacura:
Autumn-Sacura Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
:giggle:
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:iconmaelora69:
Maelora69 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You've really made us care about the characters - really good job!
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:iconkaytori:
Kaytori Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012
think Quint went a little too far then but he didn't seriously hurt her. Can't wait to find out what his deal is.
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