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Submitted: July 16, 2012
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Murts Ch1 p16by ~Autumn-Sacura

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Page #16. This is another experimental page. I doubt I'll do a page like this again, though it was one of my favourite pages to make ^__^
IMPORTANT NOTE: this page is actually two pages in one. Click on small gray arrows on margin to see the second half of every characters part.

Thanks to ~Zannid for beta-reading almost all of first chapter. But if you'll find any grammatic mistakes anyway, say me. I'll fix them immediately.
Don't forget about hidden content.

How to read this story: [link]
First page: [link]
Previous page: [link]
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~Eydas Jul 19, 2012

I've been reading your comic... and it's great! I really like it, the plot is very interesting and I love the way you draw.

~Autumn-Sacura Jul 20, 2012 Professional Digital Artist

Thank you!

~Artificer-Urza Jul 17, 2012

Equality is meaningless. An individual may be greater or lesser than another in whatever abilities they have, but rarely equal.

~Autumn-Sacura Jul 20, 2012 Professional Digital Artist

Sorry, not sure to which part it was referred...

~Artificer-Urza Jul 20, 2012

What Yulie is thinking in the last panel. "Maybe men and women can't be equal?"

~Phantom-Brave Jul 16, 2012

This page thing you did. Works great.

~Autumn-Sacura Jul 20, 2012 Professional Digital Artist

Thank you!

~tenko72 Jul 16, 2012

I really like what you did with the arrows here.

I wonder Guitry's art looks like the dream world.

~Autumn-Sacura Jul 20, 2012 Professional Digital Artist

~Raccoo Jul 16, 2012

Awesome comic, a few things I noticed.

First panel thought bubble,"This is my first serious fight with Yulie."
Third panel,"Little asshole! You'll end up in a penal colony!"
Hidden panel 3," If I smell of cigs, my old man will start to catch on."
Fourth panel thought bubble,"Damn! After all that happened to me, now this..."

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