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Page #17. Dream world again, suddenly. By the way, have you noticed that color of margins differs depending of place? ^__^

Thanks to ~Zannid for beta-reading almost all of first chapter. But if you'll find any grammatic mistakes anyway, say me. I'll fix them immediately.
Don't forget about hidden content.

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:icondoryane-01:
Always also good!^^
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:iconautumn-sacura:
Autumn-Sacura Jul 24, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you for support ^__^
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:iconkaytori:
he's worried about quint?
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:iconautumn-sacura:
Autumn-Sacura Jul 24, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Apparently, yes ^__^
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cookingcookie Jul 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You have an error in the last panel. It should be "Crap! What should I do NOW", instead of "Crap! What should I do KNOW?"
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:iconautumn-sacura:
Autumn-Sacura Jul 24, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Fixed! Thank you for help ^__^
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:icontenko72:
In the second panel, "But why does it feel so real..." would be better. I also wonder who is talking at the end, Suzer or Yulie? It sounds like Suzer, but it's coming from Yulie.
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:iconautumn-sacura:
Autumn-Sacura Jul 20, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Yep, that was mistake! Fixed. Thank you :love:
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:iconartificer-urza:
The only problem I can see is the last panel; shouldn't the speech bubble be pointing to Suzer and not Yulie?
And now I wonder what dream-Quint is like. Still an ass?
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