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Page #19. Yeah, I'm not updating wery often, too much work all around. But that's just for now.

Thanks to ~Zannid for beta-reading almost all of first chapter. But if you find any grammar mistakes, tell me. I'll fix them immediately.
Don't forget about hidden content.

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wow, awesome work *^*
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~Autumn-Sacura Aug 8, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you!
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:iconxander-bell:
I'm loving this ^_^
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~Autumn-Sacura Aug 8, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you :)
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~Autumn-Sacura Aug 8, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks ^__^
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:iconkaytori:
wait whose Agai?
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~Autumn-Sacura Aug 8, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
The koshmar from beginning of the story [link]
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:iconkaytori:
thanks thought so but wasn't sure.
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~evelyn-stormcraft Jul 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Panel 5: Instead of "that will break her," I would say "that will tear her apart." It creates a more gruesome image that way.

Also, this has been eating at me for a while: "If you find any grammar mistakes, TELL me."
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