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Murts Ch1 p5

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Page #5. Yep, there is a time skip. Now I think I made it too sudden, but it's too late to change now... Also - fanservice! Hope it'll distract you from bad writing for some time ^__^
Thanks to ~Zannid for beta-reading almost all of first chapter.
But if you'll find any grammatic mistakes anyway, say me. I'll fix them immediately.
Don't forget about hidden content.

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I love it! i love the first pic with Abeeka, its great! <3 also, seems i havent read enough butis mythology your own or where did you get it from!? :o