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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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Does Felix really have no one else to turn to but someone who hates him? And I thought bullying girls was pathetic enough.
Oh, Pedot, so chivalrous trying to stand up for Vesta! Ha, ha, . . . God I hope he gets naked at some point . . .
Panel 6: "Should I send him away?" 'Sent' is past tense.
Panel 7: "after all the things that you and Quint did to us." I think "have done to us" might be more appropriate here; 'did' suggests the subject is entirely in the past, while 'have done' tells the reader that it's a current event with a history. (I would also recommend moving Vesta's thought balloon to the center of the panel, to show the thought comes after what she says...unless of course it's not meant to come after.)
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Something I've been curious about: why is the real-world part of Murts set in Richmond? Is there a specific reason?
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Finally, I wanted to share this with you: [link] . It's another Flash-based comic, and I thought you might like to study the techniques they used.
About Richmond... hehe, ok, I'll tell you! I wanted to make country where story take a place uncertain. And Richmond is a very common name. Several cities in the United States, Canada and Europe are called so.