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:iconautumn-sacura:
The last bit of fight scene! Well, I know, it really pretty stupid... Enemy warriors wounded him and suddenly retreat in fear. My sister said it was silly. But... just believe it ^__^ Let's say they are very silly and cowardish warriors ^__^
This page was checked by ~ThanatosGear but I still ready to hear your advices!
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~Chappychan Oct 31, 2008  Student General Artist
NO! Wonderfully done but NOO! *cries* Hes hurted!
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!Kitsune-Tsuzuki Sep 23, 2007
No!! He can't get hurt!! T_T Nooooooooo!!! But it's nicely done!
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~SindyL34 Sep 20, 2007
its hard to read I don't know witch come first T_T (i mean the panels)
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~Autumn-Sacura Sep 20, 2007  Professional Digital Artist
I forget to say to read it as Western comics ^__^
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*fireheart1001 Sep 20, 2007
It doesn't matter if he's wounded. If they're that type of villains (cowardly), they'll retreat and stay away until they return with either reinforcements or a plan for a trap. So, don't worry about it. :D
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~Autumn-Sacura Sep 20, 2007  Professional Digital Artist
Hehe, ok ^__^
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*fireheart1001 Sep 21, 2007
;)
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~evelyn-stormcraft Sep 20, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
I think the fight sequence could have been one or two pages longer. I didn't get the feeling of how tough Shai really was.

Something I've noticed about your storytelling style is that everything happens very quickly. You cover the important parts well, and catch the reader's attention, but there seem to be missing details that would add depth to the story and make it really fascinating. Don't get me wrong; I love what you do. But I feel there's room for it to be made even better.

Keep up the good work!
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~Autumn-Sacura Sep 20, 2007  Professional Digital Artist
Hmm, the one reason of it, what in some terms I prefer western comics to manga. Manga sometimes can be very... watered. Readers can just lost interest, as it happened with many people who read Naruto (including me) I prefer compactness of western comics more.
But the main reason of course - it just too hard to wrote something bigger when you are alone and have not so many free time ^__^
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~evelyn-stormcraft Sep 21, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, again, you're talking to the guy that's never actually read a manga. Even so, just being a Naurto TV watcher I get your point; it's amazing how much talking they get done in the midst of a battle! And yes, I enjoy western comics too. But even those have a pace to them, and take the time to develop the characters thoroughly. I'm just saying it's something to keep an eye on.

But as I said, you're doing fine. Keep going!
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