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:iconautumn-sacura:
Well, as always give me your advices ^__^
I'm little confused about last panel - I'm not sure, I said it right.
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~Tirinity Oct 28, 2007  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I aree with Xahras

and omg XDDD hahaha "now please! Lie (not lay ;3 it's past tense) my angel!" he says and throws her onto the bed XDD
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~Chappychan Oct 31, 2008  Student General Artist
LOL! I was thinking "Isn't it 'lie'?"=P I love this! Great job once again Sakura!<3
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:iconxahras:
I think the last panel should say, "After kissing a guy, death doesn't look so scary." What you wrote technically works grammatically but using present tense flows better.
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:iconryouyamibakura:
rofl that is the greatest thing I've heard, that last line X3
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:iconrhinjinfan:
can't wait for the next page!
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~evelyn-stormcraft Sep 27, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
My translations (I know, it gets old):

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1: OK

2: OK

4: OK

5: "What is this? Waterskin?"

7: "Prepare to die, Altan-Dashi!"

8: OK

9: "After kissing a guy, death doesn't look so scary!"

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Great job! And I can't wait to see what happens next!
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Mood: Love ~Anariu Sep 27, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
I am loving this more with each page!!
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~Chaotic212 Sep 27, 2007  Student Digital Artist
ROFL..... xD that last panel... i lolled
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:iconlockxshockxbarrel:
hahah this is sooo adorable
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:iconstuurminator:
Foreplay, Altan, foreplay! "Great pleasure" my ass...
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