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Yuzo-01 by ~Autumn-Sacura:iconAutumn-Sacura:


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Submitted: May 12
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This is first page of my manga. Probably, some of you alrady saw this picture in my gallery, but without words.
Thanks for my dear sister for helping with script!
And as always I asking everyone about help with grammar. Please, tell me about mistakes ^__^
For a few Russian-readers here is translation:
Итак, вы неверное ждёте, что я расскажу вам очередную сказку о приключениях смелых героев, спасающих прекрасных принцесс? Но герои уже давно мертвы, а принцессы продают «травку» в школьных буфетах. Боги уже исчезли из городов, оставив миру после себя людей, которые сами распорядились предоставленной свободой. Моя история началась, когда мир уже был расколот. Верхний и нижний миры. Мир Людей и Мир Бессмертных. В палатах Верхних Дворцов обитали они – восемь избранных, вечная жизнь которых протекала в безмятежном эдеме, созданном Бессмертными. У каждого из них был свой путь и свои причины отказаться от тленной жизни нижнего мира, и каждый из них обладал силой, которую в нынешнем отсутствии бога можно назвать «божественной».

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~terin-kail:iconterin-kail: May 12, 2008, 12:44:23 AM
Wow... love the landscaping.

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~arbaros:iconarbaros: May 12, 2008, 12:49:31 AM
buttercat?

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~Celithralia:iconCelithralia: May 12, 2008, 3:40:37 AM
Buttercat indeed! Here is a suggestion for minor changes in grammer... but I'm not an english professor. o.o Great drawing as usual. ;)

So, I guess you are waiting to hear another fairy tale about brave heroes, saving beautiful princesses? But, heroes are dead and princesses are selling "weed" in the basements. Gods have vanished from cities, leaving the freedom for the people. My story begins when the world was already divided into upper and lower worlds. The world of mortals and the world of immortals. In upper palaces they live, eight chosen, eternally enjoying their paradise bliss. All of them had their own way and own reasons to leave the rotten lower world. All of them have power which you could call godlike, in the current absense of god.
~K-Nashi:iconK-Nashi: May 12, 2008, 5:21:27 AM
wow..i always loved scenery like this..^^ but a little word of advice though...The floating house's detail doesn't seem much compared to details on the garden and the foreground...
anyway that's just me..Nice Work!! :D

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"Omnia mutantur, nihil interit.
Everything's change, yet nothing is lost"

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~FrauNebel:iconFrauNebel: May 12, 2008, 5:28:39 AM
wow...fantastic *_*

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~antoinette721:iconantoinette721: May 12, 2008, 9:48:45 AM
so i guess you are waiting *for* another fairy tale

my story begins when *the* world was

those are the only mistakes i've seen. unless you meant to write it that way.

But i want to read it now!!!!!! it sounds so cool :boogie:

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~KuddlyKat:iconKuddlyKat: May 12, 2008, 4:16:15 PM
Yes!!! You translated it in Russian!!! I am soooooo happy! There are still a few things I cannot read but I understood most of it! Great job! :XD:
*LadyMao:iconLadyMao: May 12, 2008, 6:32:21 PM
THis is so awesome, like all of your work.
Do you plan on putting up anything else for your manga?
Planning on making some copies to sell?

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