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Yuzo-02 by ~Autumn-Sacura:iconAutumn-Sacura:

Categories Fan Art > Manga/Anime > Traditional > Books/Novels

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Submitted: May 13
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Another page. As previous, you probably saw this earlier.
As always, show me my mistakes ^__^
For Russian-readers:
А внизу на земле, в падшем мире, копошились люди. Уничтожив мир, они жили на обломках своей цивилизации, пытаясь упорядочить собственноручно созданный хаос. В аду не хватило бы места для грешников Нижнего мира – разврат, кровавые бойни, наркотики – это реальность, это обычный день. Почему? Почему же Бессмертные не снизошли до людей? Не принесли людям свет, счастье, удачу? Наверное, потому как от момента сотворения Миры занимают друг к другу позицию «вооружённого до зубов нейтралитета». Моя история – не сказка, и я не её главный герой. «Однажды, в мире Бессмертных…»

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~Celithralia:iconCelithralia: May 13, 2008, 6:15:22 AM
I like the train through the skyscraper... :D
~Staraya:iconStaraya: May 13, 2008, 12:16:03 PM
In the writing you put "Why Immortals aren't going to help people?" It should be "Why aren't Immortals helping people?" :)
Aside from that I love it. Especially the crazy perspective on the traintrack

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Trespassers will be violated
~antoinette721:iconantoinette721: May 13, 2008, 2:33:06 PM
mas!!!

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Don't Do it Seamus!
~gangeul:icongangeul: May 13, 2008, 3:22:34 PM
This sounds very interesting! ^^

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If tuna is the chicken of the sea then maybe shrimp is the roach of the sea.
~arbaros:iconarbaros: May 13, 2008, 9:05:42 PM
the train ended up in the tower? That's wicked...!

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Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery but today is a gift, that's why it's called a present. * Dreams are always far away but remember, far away is not unreachable...
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~RyouYamiBakura:iconRyouYamiBakura: May 13, 2008, 9:15:44 PM Mood: Joy
rofl a tram through a building XDD classic! this is a great background pic! I can't find anything wrong with it :D the idea of putting the bottom view of the railing was a great idea! it gives much more depth to the picture! points for awesomeness!! :heart:

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"Yaaaaay!" :clap: :clap: :clap:
"Happiness and fun for everyone!"

~Big & Rich
~evelyn-stormcraft:iconevelyn-stormcraft: May 13, 2008, 10:30:04 PM
That place reminds me of Seattle. :D An excellent rendition of the world gone mad.

My re-translation of page two...again, referring to both the Russian and the translation that came before it:

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And below, in their abandoned world, mortals were swarming.

[Page one looked like it was all in past tense, but I may have been wrong...online translations can be confusing.]

They destroyed their world, and now they were trying to control the chaos they created. Debauchery, violence, drugs--this was reality, what was "normal." Why? Why did the immortals not help these people, not bring them light, happiness, and joy?...Probably because ever since the universe began, our worlds have maintained a policy of "heavily armed neutrality."

My story is not a fairy tale. And I am no hero.

"Once upon a time, in the world of immortals..."

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Looking forward to page three! Keep going!

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