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Yuzo-04 by ~Autumn-Sacura:iconAutumn-Sacura:


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Submitted: May 15
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Next page. On this page you can see what his pupils looks like lightning ^__^ And "Chinese toad" is his personal swear-word.
Russian:
Привет, дневник! Сегодня день 3 589 128…
Абсолютно такой же, как день 3 589 127…
…И как день 2 956 457. Китайская жаба, ненавижу все это!

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~tenko72:icontenko72: May 15, 2008, 5:56:01 AM
I like the bit where Yuzo throws paper at her. It's funny!

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~child-of-exiles:iconchild-of-exiles: May 15, 2008, 6:15:55 AM
lol, funny and cute "chinese toad" has become my new swear-word :p
~LarahRose:iconLarahRose: May 15, 2008, 12:11:28 PM
Great as always, I love his personal swear-word. XD

There's one thing I'd like to bring up though.

The line "Just the same day as day # 3 589 127," as you wrote it sounds like it's the exact same day, what I mean is, if day # 3 589 127 is a Tuesday, it sounds like you're saying day # 3 589 128 is the exact same Tuesday. I assume you meant it's a day in which the events are pretty much exactly the same as the previous day. In that case the sentence should be "Just the same as day # 3 589 127..."

It's not really a major error, but I just wanted to let you know about it. ^.^
~Rhinjinfan:iconRhinjinfan: May 15, 2008, 6:56:23 PM
chinese toad lawl! That's cool though, keep it up and you're awesome :hug:

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~evelyn-stormcraft:iconevelyn-stormcraft: May 15, 2008, 9:22:36 PM
My translation (much shorter than the last three :D ):

Panel 1: 'Hello, journal! Today is day #3,589,128...'

[Boys don't usually call it a diary, but I'm not Yuzo. He can call it whatever he wants.]

Panel 2: 'Exactly the same as day #3,589,127...'

Panel 3: '...and day #3,589,126 before that.' Chinese toad, I hate all this!'

[Question: Does he actually say, "Chinese toad?" Everyone else seems to like it; I'm just curious.]

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Yuzo seems very much the analytical sort. I look forward to getting to know him.

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~evelyn-stormcraft:iconevelyn-stormcraft: May 15, 2008, 9:32:46 PM
P.S. -- In panel 5, the word you're looking for is "CRUNCH." You may want to add that in.

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~Autumn-Sacura:iconAutumn-Sacura: May 16, 2008, 12:03:57 AM
Heh, interesting note about journal! Thanks ^__^ Yes, he really say "Chinese toad". ^__^ In Russian it sounds more insulting.

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